Chapter One is the first chapter of My Immortal, and serves primarily to introduce our main character and her relationship with Draco Malfoy.


Enoby introduces herself to the reader, starting the very first long description of what a character is wearing. We find her on both a snowy and rainy day at Hogwarts, where a lot of preps stare at her; she responds by flipping them the middle finger. Draco then appears, attempting to begin a conversation with Ebony but, because of his shyness and Ebony's friends calling her away, he is unable to continue anything.

Author's note Edit

  • "Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) 2 my gf (ew not in that way) Raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX!"

Notable Quotes Edit

  • I’m not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he’s a major fucking hottie.
  • “Hey Ebony!” shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Draco Malfoy!
  • AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz!