Chapter Ten is the tenth chapter of My Immortal, and features one of the most peculiar contradictions in the entire fanfic.


Still reeling from her experience with Voldemort in the previous chapter, Ebony practices with her band Bloody Gothic Rose 666. The other members of the band are Diabolo Weasley (Ron Weasley canon wrecked), HargridB'loody MaryDraco and Vampire. At the start of the chapter, Vampire is off watching The Corpse Bride, while Draco is slitting his wrists. No one is worried for Draco as "he wouldn’t die because he was a vampire too" and the only way to kill a vampire is with a c-r-o-s-s or a steak

While covering the song "Helena", Ebony bursts into tears. When B'loody Mary asks what's wrong, Ebony confesses that Voldemort told her to kill Vampire or he'll kill Draco. And speak of the devil, Draco appears from behind the wall, getting upset with Ebony for not telling him. This causes Ebony to cry more, which makes Draco cry in turn, and he departs from the scene.

An hour later Dumblydore appears, informing them that Draco has committed suicide by slitting his wrists... despite the fact that it had earlier been stated that slitting your wrists couldn't kill a vampire!

Author's note Edit

AN: stup it u gay fags if u donot lik ma story den fukk off! ps it turnz out b’loody mary isn’t a muggle afert al n she n vampire r evil datz y dey movd houses ok!

Notable QuotesEdit

  • I knew Draco was probably slitting his wrists (he wouldn’t die because he was a vampire too and the only way you can kill a vampire is with a c-r-o-s-s (there’s no way I’m writing that) or a steak) and Vampire was probably watching a depressing movie like The Corpse Bride.
  • “What the fuck do you think?” I asked angrily. And then I said. “Well, Voldemort came and the fucking bastard told me to fucking kill Harry! But I don’t want to kill him, because, he’s really nice, even if he did go out with Draco. But if I don’t kill Harry, then Voldemort, will fucking kill Draco!” I burst into tears.
  • “How could you- you- you fucking poser muggle bitch!” (c is dat out of character?)
  • “What have you done!” He started to cry wisely.
  • “Ebony Draco has been found in his room. He committed suicide by slitting his wrists.”

Trivia Edit

  • Vampire and Hargrid are stated as members of Ebony's band, even though Ebony had met Vampire the previous morning, while Hargrid is called in Chapter 12, a "fucked up prep" who used to be mean to Ebony for being "gottik".