Chapter Twenty is the 20th chapter of My Immortal.


Ebony gets dressed in anticipation of the MCR concert in Hogsmeade. She has earlier been alerted that Draco has a surprise for her, and wonders what it will be.

Loopin arrives at her room and asks for "condemns". Ebony mocks him, as he is a pedo. He calls her a "fuker" and leaves.

When Ebony exits her room, she discovers "Snake" and Loopin "doin' it" in the hallway, with Dobby watching. Ebony takes a video of them, and readily admits that she intends to blackmail them with it. They chase her, but she throws her "wound" at them and they trip over it.

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Vampire Potter shows up, looking "extremely fucking hot," and says that Draco refuses to go to the MCR concert. Ebony agrees to go with him instead. They take the Mercedes that Serious Blak gave to Vampire; the plates say MCR666 on the front and ENOBY on the back. At the concert, Ebony and Vampire make out and mosh to the music. Then Ebony sees Draco, "cryin in a corner."

Author's Notes Edit

AN: I sed I dnoty ker wut u fink! stof pflamin ok prepz!1 fangz 2 raven 4 da help!1 oh yah btw ill be un vacation in transilvania 4 da nex 3 dayz so dnot expect updatz.

Quotes Edit

  • “No, actshelly (geddit, hell) kan I plz burrow sum condemns.” he growld angrily.
  • Den I gasped...Snake and Loopin were in da middle of da empty hall, doin it, and Dobby was watching!1
  • I started to run. They chased me but I threw my wound at them and dey tripped over it.
  • "You dimwit!." Snake began 2 shoot angrily.